Haiku- Cassandra
I look and see him
Dead as can be, laying there still
I think to myself
I told all, this would happen
But no one believed
Now Hector is dead
And Troy will be the same soon
But all these problems
Would not have happened
If you listened to me.
Hint Fiction- Helen
His body is on the back of the chariot. His death will put us all women into slavery but not me.
Point of View- the vantage point or stance from which a story is told, the eye and mind through which the action is perceived and filtered.
haiku format (5-7-5) 3/5
ReplyDeletehint fiction - I love it! 5/5
POV definition is missing 0/2
+ 2 for POV def. - your haiku format is still incorrectly done.
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